Chapter One was fantastic! The pacing, the voice, the rhythm of your writing is hypnotic, easy to get lost in. It plays like a game of chess... with players being killed off and Bishop's strategies being worked out moves ahead.
Thank you for the kind words, Havuk! I have added some graphic novel style panels in Chapter II. I would love to know if you like them or if you prefer just the text. Thanks again! -D
Went back after you mentioned adding graphics. Yikes, those are fantastic, they're dark just like I imagined Bishop's world to be. The red against the blacks and grays is nice, not too many colors, muted like a noir film. Really love the comic look of it all, plus the onimatopoeias... they POP out at you in a good way.
Hahaha, so this is what you were doing all this time! Really happy to see the fruits of your labor.
I'm so glad you are excited to return to Bishop's chaotic life. I think I have really found him now and can do justice to the story I want to tell. I sincerely hope you enjoy it!
Where can we find the earlier Bishop posts or books?
The previous version of Bishop is archived. However, chapter 3 is coming out in a day or two.
Chapter One was fantastic! The pacing, the voice, the rhythm of your writing is hypnotic, easy to get lost in. It plays like a game of chess... with players being killed off and Bishop's strategies being worked out moves ahead.
Nice to see both Bishop and Dallas are back :)
Thank you for the kind words, Havuk! I have added some graphic novel style panels in Chapter II. I would love to know if you like them or if you prefer just the text. Thanks again! -D
Went back after you mentioned adding graphics. Yikes, those are fantastic, they're dark just like I imagined Bishop's world to be. The red against the blacks and grays is nice, not too many colors, muted like a noir film. Really love the comic look of it all, plus the onimatopoeias... they POP out at you in a good way.
Hahaha, so this is what you were doing all this time! Really happy to see the fruits of your labor.
He's baaaaaccckk! Here we go.... can't wait to get back on the board and follow Bishop! So happy to see this post, Dallas!!
I'm so glad you are excited to return to Bishop's chaotic life. I think I have really found him now and can do justice to the story I want to tell. I sincerely hope you enjoy it!
I would definitely read your book!
Thank you so much!