What a great chapter! Bishop and Elena's dialogue was sharp and kept the story moving at a quick pace. All this while in the safe house, well done. So many cinematic moments and lines, my favorite is Bishop's comeback, “With one arm and bad manners.” Haha, love it. Great work Dallas.
What a great chapter! Bishop and Elena's dialogue was sharp and kept the story moving at a quick pace. All this while in the safe house, well done. So many cinematic moments and lines, my favorite is Bishop's comeback, “With one arm and bad manners.” Haha, love it. Great work Dallas.
Was really looking forward to reading the next chapter! Thanks for posting!
I hope you enjoy it!